Practice SAT Prompts

For updated prompts, go to the college board:
 http://professionals.collegeboard.com/testing/sat-reasoning/prep/essay-prompts

More words do not give you a higher score, but fewer words will give you a lower score (as you cannot adequately develop your idea). 

Higher scoring essays will usually be 350--450 words in length.  For most of you, that means you should shoot for close to two full pages of writing.

March 2014, Prompt 1

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
Many people are philanthropists, giving money to those in need. And many people believe that those who are rich—those who can afford to give the most—should contribute the most to charitable organizations. Others, however, disagree. Why should those who are more fortunate than others have more of a moral obligation to help those who are less fortunate?
Assignment: Should people who are more fortunate than others have more of a moral obligation to help those who are less fortunate? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

 

 2014, Prompt 2

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
Our culture puts entirely too much emphasis on popular entertainment. Of course, we all need to be distracted occasionally, but if we spend a lot of time browsing our favorite websites, watching television, playing video games, or updating our social networking accounts, we are merely avoiding life’s more important realities. Moreover, none of these activities helps us develop any of the skills or acquire any of the knowledge we need to succeed in the real world.
Assignment: Can popular entertainment offer us anything of value, or is it just a worthless distraction? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

 

2014, Prompt 3

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
By never being satisfied with what we have, we are never content. Our focus on growth, progress, and the idea of “more” makes us fundamentally unhappy, always seeking more than what we need. I used to believe greatly in “growth,” but I’ve changed my mind. It now makes sense to me that growth for growth’s sake creates a fundamental dissatisfaction with what I have.
Adapted from Ron McDonald, The Spirituality of Community Life: When We Come ’Round Right
Assignment: Do growth and progress make us happy or do they lead to dissatisfaction? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

 

 

2013, Prompt 1

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • We are often reminded that acquiring and owning material possessions—money, property, jewelry, even clothing—will not lead to true happiness. While it is certainly true that material possessions alone cannot bring happiness or provide us with genuine meaning in life, there is something to be said for having material possessions. Not only can they make us comfortable, but the happiness they can provide, while it may be momentary, is still happiness.
  • Assignment: Do material possessions make us truly happy? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

2013, Prompt 2

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Some people emphasize that strong leaders never depart from their goal, plan, or vision and that such dedication is, in fact, a measure of their strength. Others would argue, however, that strong leaders are flexible. Strong leaders know when to admit they have made a mistake and when it is appropriate to change their goal or mission. This flexibility shows their strength and the extent of their wisdom.
  • Assignment: Is flexibility the sign of a strong and wise leader? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

2013, Prompt 3

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Aiming advertisements for products directly at teenagers is a practice that occurs on television, in magazines, and on the Internet. These advertisements may help prepare young people for adulthood, as teenagers gain experience in evaluating and selecting from among the many options in our complex consumer society. Many critics, however, argue that teenagers are especially vulnerable to misleading claims of the advertising industry; moreover, they argue that advertisements often promote values harmful to young people.
  • Assignment: Are advertisements harmful to teenagers? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

2013, Prompt 4

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Too often, people—especially young people, who may not have settled on a firm identity yet—try to imitate others, because it is easier to do so than to develop their own unique individuality. They focus on trying to imitate what seems attractive or desirable in others. But imitating others is never a good idea: when we imitate others, all we do is harm our ability to develop our own individuality.
  • Assignment: Is imitation of others always harmful? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.


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2009, Prompt 1
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Planning lets people impose order on the chaotic processes of making or doing something new. Too much planning, however, can lead people to follow the same predetermined course of action, to do things the same way they were done before. Creative thinking is about breaking free from the way that things have always been. That is why it is vital for people to know the difference between good planning and too much planning.
    • Adapted from Twyla Tharp, The Creative Habit
  • Assignment:  Does planning interfere with creativity? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
2009, Prompt 2
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Most people underestimate their own abilities. They tend to remember their failures more vividly than their successes, and for this reason they have unrealistically low expectations about what they are capable of. Those individuals who distinguish themselves through great accomplishments are usually no more talented than the average person: they simply set higher standards for themselves, since they have higher expectations about what they can do.
  • Assignment:  Do highly accomplished people achieve more than others mainly because they expect more of themselves? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

2009, Prompt 3
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • People are taught that they should not go back on their decisions. In fact, our society supports the notion that to change your mind is evidence of weakness and unreliability, leading many people to say, "Once I decide, I decide!" But why do people make such a statement? If factors, feelings, and ideas change, isn't the ability to make a new decision evidence of flexibility, adaptability, and strength?
    • Adapted from Theodore I. Rubin, Compassion and Self-Hate
  • Assignment:  Should people change their decisions when circumstances change, or is it best for them to stick with their original decisions? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

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2007, Prompt 1
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • People are happy only when they have their minds fixed on some goal other than their own happiness. Happiness comes when people focus instead on the happiness of others, on the improvement of humanity, on some course of action that is followed not as a means to anything else but as an end in itself. Aiming at something other than their own happiness, they find happiness along the way. The only way to be happy is to pursue some goal external to your own happiness.
    • Adapted from John Stuart Mill, Autobiography
  • Assignment:  Are people more likely to be happy if they focus on goals other than their own happiness? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

2007, Prompt 2
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Heroes may seem old-fashioned today. Many people are cynical and seem to enjoy discrediting role models more than creating new ones or cherishing those they already have. Some people, moreover, object to the very idea of heroes, arguing that we should not exalt individuals who, after all, are only flesh and blood, just like the rest of us. But we desperately need heroes—to teach us, to captivate us through their words and deeds, to inspire us to greatness.
    • Adapted from Psychology Today, "How To Be Great! What Does It Take To Be A Hero?"
  • Assignment:  Is there a value in celebrating certain individuals as heroes? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
2007, Prompt 3
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • The advancements that have been made over the past hundred years or more are too numerous to count. But has there been progress? Some people would say that the vast number of advancements tells us we have made progress. Others, however, disagree, saying that more is not necessarily better and that real progress—in politics, literature, the arts, science and technology, or any other field—can be achieved only when an advancement truly improves the quality of our lives.
  • Assignment:  Have modern advancements truly improved the quality of people's lives? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
2007, Prompt 4

  • It is not true that prosperity is better for people than adversity. When people are thriving and content, they seldom feel the need to look for ways to improve themselves or their situation. Hardship, on the other hand, forces people to closely examine—and possibly change—their own lives and even the lives of others. Misfortune rather than prosperity helps people to gain a greater understanding of themselves and the world around them.
  • Assignment:  Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

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2006, Prompt 1
  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • It is wrong to think of ourselves as indispensable. We would love to think that our contributions are essential, but we are mistaken if we think that any one person has made the world what it is today.  The contributions of individual people are seldom as important or as necessary as we think they are.
  • Assignment: Do we put too much value on the ideas or actions of individuals.  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your     point of View on each issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation.
2006, Prompt 2

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Many people deny that stories about characters and events that are not real can teach us about ourselves or about the world around us.  They claim that literature does not offer us worthwhile information about the real world. These people argue that the feelings and ideas we gain from books and stories obstruct, rather than contribute to, clear thought.
    • Adapted from Jennifer L. McMahon, “The Function of Fiction”
  • Assignment:  Can books and stories about characters and events that are not real teach us anything useful?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your readings studies, experience, or observations.
2006, Prompt 3

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • “No one is perfect.”  There are few among us who would disagree with this familiar statement. Certain that perfection is an impossible goal, many people willingly accept flaws and shortcomings in themselves and others.  Yet such behavior leads to failure. People can only succeed if they try to achieve perfection in everything they do.
  •  Assignment:  Can people achieve success only if they aim to be perfect?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue.  Supplement your position with reasoning and examples taken from your studies, experience, or observations.
2006, Prompt 4

  • Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
  • Everybody has some choice.  People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are.  I don’t believe in circumstances.  The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want, if they can’t find them, make them.
    • Adapted from George Bernard Shaw, Mrs. Warren’s Profession
  • Assignment:  Do success and happiness depend on the choices people make rather than on factors beyond their control?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

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2005, Prompt 1


  • We like to think that if someone has “the right stuff,” he or she will naturally rise to the top. But it isn’t true. In that same way that acting talent doesn’t guarantee stardom, the capacity for doesn’t guarantee that one will run a corporation or a government. In fact, time, genuine3 achievement is not highly value, and those who are skilled at achieving greatness are not necessarily those who are ready to lead.
    • Adapted from Warren Bennis, On Becoming a Leader
  • Assignment:  Are leaders necessarily people who are most capable of leadership?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation.
2005, Prompt 2

  • How valuable is history for our generation?  On the surface this question is not as easy as it once might have been, for there is a widespread belief that history may no longer be relevant to modern life. We live, after all,  in an age that appears very different from the world that came before us.
    • Stephen Vaughn, “History: Is It Relevant?”
  • Assignment:  Is knowledge of the past no longer useful for us today?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on t his issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from hour reading, studies, experience, or observations. 
2005, Prompt 3

  • The free expression of thoughts and opinions is one of humanity’s most precious rights. Every Citizen must be  able to speak, write, and publish freely, provided that he  or she is held accountable for the abuse of this liberty in cases determined by the law.
    • Adapted from Thomas Paine, Rights of Man
  • Assignment:  Is it necessary to limit or put restrictions on freedom of thought and expression?  Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue.  Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
2005, Prompt  4

  • Progress is likely to slow down once science and technology have met our basics human needs.  New developments in science and technology will not continue to produce more societal benefits.  In fact, the promise that science and technology will continue to benefit us is increasingly doubtful when so many individuals find their lives changing in ways they cannot control and in directions they do not desire.
    • Adapted for Daniel Sarewitz, “Social Change and Science Policy”
  • Assignment: Do the benefits of scientific and technological developments come at the cost of undesirable changes to people’s lives? Plan and write an essay, etc., etc.





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More Prompts
   


Prompt 1
  • There are situations where flattery is mandatory: The bride is always beautiful. If we look at someone’s artwork, we are obliged to say something complimentary to the artist. If we visit someone with a new baby, we are required to say the infant is cute. In such situations, to say nothing is interpreted as rudeness. We compliment each other because we understand that flattery makes life run smoothly.
  • Adapted from Richard Stengel, "You’re Too Kind: A Brief History of Flattery"
  • Assignment: Is praising others, even if the praise is excessive or undeserved, a necessary part of life? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
Prompt 2
  • Beauty is not a quality in people or in objects themselves. It exists in the mind that perceives those objects, and each mind perceives beauty differently. To seek real beauty, in some absolute sense, is pointless. Where one person sees beauty, another may even see the opposite. For this reason, we all ought to accept our own perceptions of who or what is beautiful, and not be influenced by the perceptions of others.
  • Adapted from David Hume, “Of the Standard of Taste”
  • Assignment: Should we be influenced by others’ perceptions of the beauty of people or things? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
Prompt 3
  • Conflict is not necessarily bad, and it does not necessarily indicate a failed interaction. It is a signal, a message that says, “Things aren’t working around here. We’ve got to do something different.” Thus, conflict can be a catalyst-a motivating force-encouraging people to interact and communicate in ways that are more satisfying. Conflict can actually benefit people by pushing them to make necessary changes.
    • Adapted from Beverly Potter, From Conflict to Cooperation
  • Assignment: Is conflict helpful? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

Prompt 4
  • What explains our increasing obsession with money and the things it can buy? It seems as though the acquisition of money is gradually replacing real measures of success, such as integrity, honesty, skill, and hard work.
    • Adapted from Alan Durning, “Limiting Consumption: Toward a Sustainable Culture”
  • Assignment: Has the acquisition of money and possessions replaced more meaningful ways of measuring our achievements? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.





SAT Scoring Percentages and Guide

6    100–97%
6-   96–93

5+  92–89
5    88–85
5-   84–81

4+  80–77
4    76–73
4-   72–71
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3+  70–68
3    67–65
3-   64–62

2+  61–59
2    58–56
2-  55–51

1   50


The following information was excerpted from the College Board.  Please go there for more information:
http://sat.collegeboard.org/practice/writing-sat-essay?pageId=practiceWritingEssay&tabValue=scoring
  1. Score of 6

    An essay in this category demonstrates clear and consistent mastery, although it may have a few minor errors. A typical essay:
    • Effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position
    • Is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas
    • Exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate and apt vocabulary
    • Demonstrates meaningful variety in sentence structure
    • Is free of most errors in grammar, usage and mechanics
    Score = 6 (Example 1)
    Score = 6 (Example 2)
  2. Score of 5

    An essay in this category demonstrates reasonably consistent mastery, although it has occasional errors or lapses in quality. A typical essay:
    • Effectively develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates strong critical thinking, generally using appropriate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position
    • Is well organized and focused, demonstrating coherence and progression of ideas
    • Exhibits facility in the use of language, using appropriate vocabulary
    • Demonstrates variety in sentence structure
    • Is generally free of most errors in grammar, usage and mechanics
    Score = 5 (Example 1)
    Score = 5 (Example 2)
  3. Score of 4

    An essay in this category demonstrates adequate mastery, although it has lapses in quality. A typical essay:
    • Develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates competent critical thinking, using adequate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position
    • Is generally organized and focused, demonstrating some coherence and progression of ideas
    • Exhibits adequate but inconsistent facility in the use of language, using generally appropriate vocabulary
    • Demonstrates some variety in sentence structure
    • Has some errors in grammar, usage and mechanics
    Score = 4 (Example 1)
    Score = 4 (Example 2)
  4. Score of 3

    An essay in this category demonstrates developing mastery, and is marked by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
    • Develops a point of view on the issue, demonstrating some critical thinking, but may do so inconsistently or use inadequate examples, reasons or other evidence to support its position
    • Is limited in its organization or focus, or may demonstrate some lapses in coherence or progression of ideas
    • Displays developing facility in the use of language, but sometimes uses weak vocabulary or inappropriate word choice
    • Lacks variety or demonstrates problems in sentence structure
    • Contains an accumulation of errors in grammar, usage and mechanics
    Score = 3 (Example 1)
  5. Score of 2

    An essay in this category demonstrates little mastery, and is flawed by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
    • Develops a point of view on the issue that is vague or seriously limited, and demonstrates weak critical thinking, providing inappropriate or insufficient examples, reasons or other evidence to support its position
    • Is poorly organized and/or focused, or demonstrates serious problems with coherence or progression of ideas
    • Displays very little facility in the use of language, using very limited vocabulary or incorrect word choice
    • Demonstrates frequent problems in sentence structure
    • Contains errors in grammar, usage and mechanics so serious that meaning is somewhat obscured
    Score = 2 (Example 1)
  6. Score of 1

    An essay in this category demonstrates very little or no mastery, and is severely flawed by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
    • Develops no viable point of view on the issue, or provides little or no evidence to support its position
    • Is disorganized or unfocused, resulting in a disjointed or incoherent essay
    • Displays fundamental errors in vocabulary
    • Demonstrates severe flaws in sentence structure
    • Contains pervasive errors in grammar, usage or mechanics that persistently interfere with meaning
    Score = 1 (Example 1)
  7. Score of 0

    Essays not written on the essay assignment will receive a score of zero

Block Day: Formative Verses

* Open

* J12

* Some new forms
Edward Lear (1812-1888)



  • Clerihew :

      • Jackson Pollock
      • It was a weakness of Voltaire’s
             To forget to say his prayers,
        And one which to his shame
             He never overcame.
      • Noah’s
        Boas
        Kept his hares
        In Pairs.
        ~ Sue Lampi (1994)
      • George Orwell
        Answered the doorbell.
        Big Brother’s Pizza at the door,
        Two with pepperoni, $19.84.
Clerihew Day celebrates the quirky verse form known as the clerihew, as well as the birthday of its inventor, Edmund Clerihew Bentley (1875-1956).
Edmund Clerihew Bentley (1875-1956)

  • A clerihew with an ABCB rhyme scheme:
    • The ignorant pronounce it Frood,
             To cavil or applaud.
      The Well-informed pronounce it Froyd,
             But I pronounce it Fraud.
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      G.K. Chesterton (1874-1936)

       

* CWP

* Grammar Review

HW: Work on your CWP

Wednesday, 11/28/12: CWP

* Open
  • Back to our Memorization Poem
  • Prayer
* Work on your CWP

* Schwager: Check grammar; review some

* Review Villanelles

* Journal 12: Compose a form poem of at least eight lines for your block day. You may write in one of the forms we have covered or any form that incorporates repetition and rhyme

Is this a Good Form? From National Geographic

HW: Journal 12


Tuesday, Nov. 27: Forms

* Open

* Notes
  • Villanelle: A French verse form consisting of five three-line stanzas and a final quatrain, with the first and third lines of the first stanza repeating alternately in the following stanzas. These two refrain lines form the final couplet in the quatrain (The Poetry Foundation). 
  • Read any two examples on your own, we will go over them tomorrow: 


Dylan Thomas...inspired Robert Zimmerman to recast himself as Bob Dylan

* Grammar
  • Look over sheets 1-2
  • Schwager (do sheets 3-4)
* Work on your CWP


HW: Grammar/CWP

Monday, Nov. 26: Forms Week

* Open
* Notes
  • Triolet: Definition: An eight-line stanza having just two rhymes and repeating the first line as the fourth and seventh lines, and the second line as the eighth  (The Poetry Foundation).
  • More Examples
  • A most challenging test of excellence in a poem featuring repetition is meaning: does the repetition add to and actually develop or change something?  That's not easy; here's a good example from Thomas Hardy.   
* Return papers

* Finish J11

* Do Grammar Sheet #3 (Schwager) or #4 (Reno)

* Work on your CWP

* For Fun: Can you compose a triolet?

HW: Work on your CWP

G.K. Chesterton: "I Wish I Were a Jellyfish"

I wish I were a jelly fish
That cannot fall downstairs:
Of all the things I wish to wish,
I wish I were a jelly fish
That hasn't any cares,
And doesn't even have to wish
"I wish I were a jelly fish
That cannot fall downstairs."

A Midsummer Night's Dream


1. Text: Perrine's pp. 1463–1529ff. MIT also offers a free online text here

2.  Study Guide
3.  Secondary Sources
4.  Memorization


5. Example Essays 
6. Listen while your read = )

More Texts and Pictures Relating to the Play are Below





















http://untendedgarden.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/midsummer06.jpg
Joaquin De Luz and Maria Kowroski in George Balanchine’s ballet “A Midsummer Night’s Dream.” Photograph by Paul Kolnik



Titania Sleeps; A Midsummer Night's Dream by Frank Cadogan Cowper

"Titania Sleeps" by Frank Cadogan Cowper

Block Day, Week 14: Grammar and Journal

* Open

* Grammar
  • Review Grammar Rules
  • Do the next grammar sheet (of the four from Focus)
  • Review the last two together
* Do J11: Choose one Collins and one Frost poem (Collins and Frost ).  Length = 1 pg. or more. 
  1. Frost: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.  
  2. Collins: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.
  3. Compare the style, tone, and structure of Robert Frost and Billy Collins.
* CWP (due date and points listed now)

HW: None

Wednesday, Nov. 14: Introduce CWP #2



* Open
I used this picture last week for someone you may see around campus (Mrs. Price).  Today, I'm using the same picture to remember Mrs. Isomi Doyle (middle, in yellow), once a teacher at MVC. 



* Synchronize Swatches (Reno and Schwager): J11 is not homework for Schwager or Reno.  We will work on it in class.

* Schwager's Classes: Turn in the FD of your political essay.  Please underline your opening thesis. 

* Quarter 2 CWP Assignment: A Christmas Blessing

* Grammar
  • Do the first sheet (Schwager) or second sheet (Reno) of of the Bedford 21 handout that is on Focus
  • Do this on paper or a .pdf editor
  • Underline the subject and circle the verb (or just write the two on your paper)

* CWP or Box

HW:
  • (Schwager) CWP or Box
  • (Reno) Finish your THE (the five paragraph essay you've been working on through LTOW).
    • Be sure you print out an MLA formatted copy
    • highlight your thesis (making sure it employs parallelism)

Extended Chapel Schedule

Tuesday, Nov. 13: Grammar, etc.

* Open

* Review Grammar 21-1, review and begin extra sheets





  • Then work on the extra practice sheets for 21-1 that you will find on Focus (in the Grammar section)

    • Schwager's classes then take essay notes
    * Schwager's Tolkien Essay Notes for Grammar
    • Dwarves (vs. dwarfs) are ok...Tolkien made it so
    • Write out numbers under 100
    • A hobbit is not a dwarf, even though they are dwarish in size
    • Hyphen vs. dash
    • No contractions 
    • Quotes (no more than 80/20)
    • The Hobbit vs. a hobbit
    • Yes: The theme is that adventure stirs secret courage in the soul. 
    • No: The theme is "secret courage stirs the soul." 
    • Do not use: Just, Really, Very (generally)

    * Let this week (you can work on it ahead of time) J11: Choose one Collins and one Frost poem. Length = 1 pg. or more. 
    1. Frost: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.  
    2. Collins: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.
    3. Compare the style, tone, and structure of Robert Frost and Billy Collins.
    HW:
    • (Schwager) Last day for the Political Essay
    • (Reno) None

    Quarter 2 CWP

    Quarter 2 CWP Assignment: A Christmas Blessing

    1. Choose a child to bless.

    •  Ideal age: 4-10
    • You may choose any other age
    2. Think of a fitting gift (purchased or made by you).
    • Try to think like the child you will be blessing.
    3. Write an adventure story or poem that weaves in a legend of the object you've bought or made.
    •  Make it at least a page in length
    •  You will need a RD and FD. 
    • You may handwrite or type this; handwriting is cooler.  
    • For the FD, make it look old 
    1. White paper (no lines)
    2. Write it out on your page
    3. Coffee OR Tea OR other
    4. Oven (low temp!) OR Blow dryer or as is
    5. If you have any heat or flame involved, please apply it under the direction of your parents.  

     
     4.  Make a map.
    • Make it awesome.  


     Lonely Mountain


    5. Hide the gift during Christmas break.

    6. Present the legend and map to the child.
    • Small child?  Help them find the treasure!
    7. When you return from break, tell us all about it!

    Extra Credit: Operation Christmas child is a lot like our quarter 2 CWP.  If you make a box, write a good letter to the child, and bring it to school by Friday, we (Schwager and Reno) will mark down extra credit for your CWP FD (up to 100%).

    8.  Due: Thursday, Dec. 13 (or 14th if that is your block day)

    9.  Grade: 25 pts
    • up to 10 points for an awesome story or poem
    • up to 5 points for perfect grammar
    • up to 5 points for artful page work/decoration
    • up to 5 points for an artful map

    Monday, Nov. 12: Collins

    * Open

    * Note that the Lit to Go link is now on the right side of the blog with the other class books.

    * Schwager: FD Essay Reviewed
    • Some Requested that we Take on a Political Subject
    • A good way to do this is to go back through the five common topics with a challenging subject. 
    • We will give this a shot in class. 
    • If you are absent, please get notes from a student who was in class.

    If we have time:

    * Review J10: Frost.  What do we learn from these poems?

    * Collins and Frost (keep on reading)

    * J11: Choose one Collins and one Frost poem.  Due block day.  Length = 1 pg. or more.
    1. Frost: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.  
    2. Collins: Locate a key image or images, and discuss how that image communicates an idea you enjoy.
    3. Compare the style, tone, and structure of Robert Frost and Billy Collins.

    HW:
    • (Schwager) Keep Reading Robert Frost and Billy Collins from your text or the Poetry Foundation (or...books =)
    • (Reno) If you've finished the LTOW worksheets on parallelism, then take a rest; if not, work!

    Billy Collins

    Poems

    Block Day, Week 12: FD, Grammar, Poetry

    * Open
      Mrs. Price is the Second from the Left
    • Mrs. Price's Birthday is this Saturday.  Write a card if you get done early today.
    • Veteran's Day is on Sunday the 11th.  Honor veterans among your family and friends.

    * (Schwager) FD Collection
    • Please underline your thesis
    • Be sure works cited is attached
    • Staple nicely (only FD, not RD or outline)
    • Place on the center table 
    • Do you actually cite anything in the essay that makes the Works Cited necessary?  You should have two different sources, at least, cited.
    • Turn in window:  I will accept this essay until Wed., Nov. 14. with no points deducted for timing.  You will score 50% or lower if turned in after class on Wed. 


    * Grammar
    • See the link on the right side for Grammar: Bedford.
    • Do Ex. 21-2 (Grammatical Sentences, Agreement...at the end of section K)
    • You already have the notes on this from last week in your binder...just review them and exercise 21-1.
    • You need to write out the sentence to correct it if it is not correct
    • You write "correct" if it is ok
    • You don't write correct when in doubt because you are lazy
    • Do all letters and numbers


    (Schwager) Billy Collins (if you have the Bedford Lit to Go online text)
    Portrait of Billy Collins by Seamus Berkeley
    • Remember, you had a user name and pass code from the business office...ages ago.  You may have to dig into your inbox a bit.  If you can't find the info., it's ok (see below). 
    • Go to chapter 20: Poetry in Depth: Billy Collins
    • Read "Introduction to Poetry" Text pg. 364
    • More with Collins: Text Pg. 525 ff. 
    • Read at least three poems and commentary.
    • From a computer at home: Action Poetry
       

    * (Schwager) Billy Collins (if you don't have the text; no problema)
    * (Reno) LTOW 
    • Check A Guide to Sorting (pgs. 13-15)
    • Fill out The Introductory Persuasive Essay Worksheet (pgs. 16-17)
    • Do all pages of Scheme 1: Parallelism (pgs. 19-24)

    * Done early? Please write something kind for Mrs. Martha Price.


    HW:
    • (Reno) 
      • Grammar- Bedford 21-2 
      • Fill out The Introductory Persuasive Essay Worksheet (pgs. 16-17)
      • Do all pages of Scheme 1: Parallelism (pgs. 19-24)
    • (Schwager) 
      • Grammar- Bedford 21-2 
      • Read at least three poems and the commentary by Billy Collins