Monday, 4/7/14

* Open
  • Review prefixes in your notes
* Per. 1: Essay Peer Review

  • Peer Review
    • Write: "PR" and your name at the bottom of the first page. 
    • Estimating Word Count
      • Count the words in five lines.
      • Divide by five.
      • Get an estimated word count per line for this writer.
      • Multiply by the number of complete lines in the essay (usually about 28 lines per page).  Count opening lines of paragraphs but not closing lines if incomplete.  
      • Aim for 350-500 words for a 5/6 on the SAT
    • Underline the thesis if it is not underlined.
    • Is it an argument?  Tell them. 
    • Circle words that exhibit strong vocabulary.
    • Circle any punctuators that are not periods.  
    • Draw a sad face if there is more than one exclamation.  
    • Draw a skull and crossbones if there are any hearts.  
    • Draw dripping blood if the writer wrote "the end" at the conclusion. 
    • Write down one thing you appreciate about this student. 
    • Return it to the owner.
 * CBC

HW: CBC -- 18

Cry, the Beloved Country Graffiti in Soweto Township, South Africa, 1985 by David Turnley from from Black Star. (A reference to Alan Paton's great 1948 novel: "Cry, the beloved country, for the unborn child that is the inheritor of our fear.")

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