Wednesday, 4/30: CWP, Part II

* Open
  • Rome, Tuscany, Riviera Tour Meeting this Friday during Lunch in B22 (Schwager's room)
  • Make sure you have the STAR testing app for your iPad.  If you don't have it, ask thy neighbor to help you. You will need it for the block day. 
* CWP Peer Edit #2 (2nd half)
  • Description: Check the verbs.  Could they be more active, more punchy?  Are there verb and nominalization phrases (there is, there are) that we can edit?  How is the description?
  • Punctuation: Are there any errors?  How is the sentence variety? Circle errors.
* Work on your CWP or Cry, the Beloved Country

HW: PRINTED Full FD of your CW; also submit to turnitin.com through Focus

Tuesday, 4/30: CWP RD Part I



* Open
  • Rome, Tuscany, Riviera Tour Meeting this Friday during Lunch in B22 (Schwager's room)
  • College Giveaway ($60,000; ends tonight)
  • Tour Number: 1397124HJ
* CWP Peer Edit #1 (first half)
  • Description: Check the verbs.  Could they be more active, more punchy?  Are there verb and nominalization phrases (there is, there are) that we can edit?  How is the description?
  • Punctuation: Are there any errors?  How is the sentence variety? Circle errors.
* Work on your CWP or Cry, the Beloved Country

HW: Full RD of your CWP

Monday, 4/29/13: Lost Tools, Cry, CWP



*Open

* Lost Tools Review:
  • per. 1,2,4,6
* Cry, the Beloved Country -- ch. 23 (J22)

* CWP (1/2 of RD for tomorrow, printed on paper)

HW: 1/2 or more of CWP RD

Block Day: Grammar, Lost Tools, etc.

* Open
  • Period 2 (except one student) tells me that they already took the STAR twice (so, they took the English part recently in Bible).  Is this true for your period also?

* Grammar
  • Write an example sentence for 
    • one semicolon
    • one colon
    • one dash
  • Review Lost Tools (or Monday, depending on how long we spend on punctuation)
* Cry, the Beloved Country
  • J22: Chapters 23-25
* Work on your CWP

HW: Read and work on your CWP

Wednesday 4/24: Holtzclaw, Lost Tools, etc.

* Open
  • A student left a small steak knife at the party...is it yours?
  • If you wish a poster up anywhere in the round table, you may hang one of your choice (they are on top of the small freezer.
  • Mr. Holtzclaw visits.
* Lost Tools
  • Lesson Five Elocution A: Nominalization Pattern I: "There is"
    • Do paper pages 74-75 (.pdf pages 84-85)
* Cry, the Beloved Country

HW: Continue with Cry, the Beloved Country

Tuesday, 4/22: J21



*Open

* Grammar
  •  In the Grammar section of your binder: please compose three sentences that require commas (only one of these may be a list).
  • Write your sentence on the board. 
  • Let's look at it together.
  • Bottom the editor: Newspaper malapropism.
* Finish Video (some classes)

* Work on J21 (through ch. 22)

HW: J22

Monday, 4/22: Paton


 

* Open

* Finish Video

* Work on J21 (through ch. 22, due Wednesday)

* If complete, please work on your CWP

HW: Do--20

Block Day: Party! Quiz, Survey, and Movie


 

* Open

* Quiz
  • Memorization
  • Reading
* Take the Bible awards survey, please.  Take the survey(s) of the class(es) you know best.  
* Pahr-tahy

* Movie

HW: J21--ch. 18

Wednesday 4/17/13: Review

* Open
* Study your paragraph first. 

* Work on your J20

* Notes: I won't be checking more journals until I catch up with my essay grading.  Keep up with your journals, though.  I will collect some and see others at the binder check.  Each chapter's assignment is the same. 

HW: Schwager: J20 (through ch. 17); review for your quiz

Tuesday 4/16: Paton

* Open
  • 4th period training today
* Part signups
  • Write your name and what you will bring...then write it down for yourself as I must erase this each period. 
  • I will give 1-2pts of extra credit (homework category) for those who bring something to the party.
* Paton
  • Video
  • Continue on to journal 
HW: Do one chapter (#15 for Schwager's students)

Monday, 4/15: Paton

Nita Gizdich
* Open

  • Reading Quiz on Block
  • Memorization Quiz on Block
  • Party on Block: Local Yokels
    • Food
      • Make it yourself or find something with local flavor
    • This requirement does not apply to paper, supplies, etc.
    • Think about signups for tomorrow
* Reach chapter together

* Paton video

HW: J20 -- 14

Block Day: Paton, Resume


* Open

* Please make sure your names and period are on you poster.

* Paton notes:
  • Ch. 1: Contrast, Symbol, Theme, Allusion in the land
  • Ch. 2: Characterization
  • Ch. 3: Exposition (learning of the city)
  • Ch. 4: Poetic Description (opening paragraphs); syntax, point of view;
  • Ch. 5: Theme: Race. "The tragedy is that they are not mended again" (56).
  • Ch. 6: Theme: Forgiveness; city
  • Ch. 7: Theme: John Kumalo, race; Msimangu: "I have one great fear in my heart, that one day when they are turned to loving, they will find we are turned to hating" (71).
  • Ch. 8: Narrative perspective; notice how the third-person perspective becomes interpretive, almost intrusive, in its foreboding omniscience ("Have no doubt it is fear in their eyes..."(77)).
  • Ch. 9: Vignette: This is a sketch of life that does not directly relate to the main character's search for his son. This is a technique Paton picked up from another writer with social concerns, John Steinbeck.
  • Ch. 10: Theme: Loss ("from every house something was gone" (93)), Despair (bottom of 99), forgiveness (101).
  • Ch. 13: Reference (Isaiah 42:6; 42:16; 40:28; 40:30-31); motif (fear); symbol (golden); allusion ("transfigured" and "lifted")
* Read ch. 13 together

* Resume

* Begin video

HW: J20 (Paton-17) due Tuesday

Wednesday, 4/10: Paton

* Open

* Reminder: Memorization: Copy your paragraph into your binder, please (even if you have already printed it).

* Check J19; discuss

* Writing: Résumé (we will work on this on our block day, but this is to get you thinking and, perhaps, briefly started)
  • Choose to begin one of the following:
    • Pages Template: Modern Photo Resume
    • Linkedin.com profile
  • Include information that will be helpful for
    • College applications
    • Recommenders (college)
    • Summer jobs
* Paton and J20

HW: J20 (do through ch. 12 for block)

Tuesday, 4/9: Paton

* Open

* Review more chapters with discussion

* Work on Journal 19

* Finish early?  Work on your Q4 CWP, due May 2. 

HW: J19

Monday 4/8/13: Paton

* Open
  • Review Paton work
  • Memorization Quiz in Two Weeks
  • Review J18 
* Nails
  • What is apartheid?  "Apart-hood" in South Africa (1948-1994). 
  • Why are family relationships so important to the well-being of a nation?
* Read the introduction to your novel (if you have not yet).  Take notes on the historical context of Cry, the Beloved Country. 
 
* Begin Journal 19 (chapters 6-10)
  • For each chapter: copy a quotation you think rich, insightful, or nicely composed.  Explain the significance of the quote in more than one sentence. 
  • Choose one word that is new or strange to you from each chapter.
    • Add the word to your vocabulary list.
    • Define it.  
* Finish early?  Work on your Q4 CWP, due May 2.

HW: J19 ch. 6-7