Tuesday, 4/30: CWP RD Part I

* Open

• Rome, Tuscany, Riviera Tour Meeting this Friday during Lunch in B22 (Schwager's room)
• College Giveaway ($60,000; ends tonight)
• Tour Number: 1397124HJ

* CWP Peer Edit #1 (first half)

• Description: Check the verbs.  Could they be more active, more punchy?  Are there verb and nominalization phrases (there is, there are) that we can edit?  How is the description?
• Punctuation: Are there any errors?  How is the sentence variety? Circle errors.

* Work on your CWP or Cry, the Beloved Country

HW: Full RD of your CWP