Wednesday, 4/30: CWP, Part II

* Open

• Rome, Tuscany, Riviera Tour Meeting this Friday during Lunch in B22 (Schwager's room)
• Make sure you have the STAR testing app for your iPad.  If you don't have it, ask thy neighbor to help you. You will need it for the block day. 

* CWP Peer Edit #2 (2nd half)

• Description: Check the verbs.  Could they be more active, more punchy?  Are there verb and nominalization phrases (there is, there are) that we can edit?  How is the description?
• Punctuation: Are there any errors?  How is the sentence variety? Circle errors.

* Work on your CWP or Cry, the Beloved Country

HW: PRINTED Full FD of your CW; also submit to turnitin.com through Focus