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| "Mistakes were made." Sometimes passive voice just feels better. |
* Lost Tools paper 37 (.pdf 48) and following
- Review Lost Tools Practice 5 (six sentences)
- cliche
- vague
- cliche
- vague
- passive
- passive
- Do "Regrettable Sentences" paper 38 ff
- This time, just write the error and fix the sentence (you do not write the incorrect sentence or the three ways you might fix it...just one)
- At least two peer edits. Editors, please check for the following:
- Exordium (present?)
- Look for parallelism (see the thesis especially)
- Check the verbs (vague, passive, or cliche?)
- Does it generally focus on one character from Antigone? It should.
- Does it take a side, stating and defending why that character should or should not have done something?
- Is there a modern application somewhere?
- Is there at least one quote in each body paragraph? Does the quote follow the MLA format?
- (Schwager)
- Final Draft Due Tuesday
- (Reno)
- ANI Chart (15 items per column)
- Move as many of your Interesting items into the A and N columns
- Select either A (Affirmative) or N (Negative)
- Then sort those items according to kind (choose your three best groups)
- If it will help, fill out pages 30-31 (PDF 40-41) in LTOW or Write out a sentence summarizing what each group shares in common (Proof)
- Write an outline, perfectly following the one on page 32 (PDF 42) of LTOW.
- Finally, do 6. Regrettable Sentences, pages 38-39 (PDF 48-49) in LTOW.
